Peer Editing

Rayna and I switched papers for the peer editing process. She made both positive and negative comments about my paper. The biggest suggestion that Rayna provided was that I should show more character progression, including how I changed as the plot itself progresses. I tried to include a few more phrases in order to heed her advice. Also, she noticed a few grammatical mistakes that really helped to polish my paper. She edited my paper with careful consideration, and I am very thankful for her suggestions!